tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5413062903651514093.post4074438687911321175..comments2023-10-12T03:20:53.815-05:00Comments on Susan Fields: Second Crusader ChallengeSusan Fieldshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02433408456603462774noreply@blogger.comBlogger41125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5413062903651514093.post-16913988959423350612011-03-27T17:16:01.235-05:002011-03-27T17:16:01.235-05:00Great twist! I loved it!Great twist! I loved it!Nashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14984530648140460594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5413062903651514093.post-26510218237641108022011-03-27T16:14:37.738-05:002011-03-27T16:14:37.738-05:00ha! fantastic twist! Loved it :)ha! fantastic twist! Loved it :)Lynda R Young as Elle Cardyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09975442291393246148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5413062903651514093.post-54968715103250162222011-03-27T05:19:00.857-05:002011-03-27T05:19:00.857-05:00Great story.
Yeah I find it hard to write anything...Great story.<br />Yeah I find it hard to write anything less than 100k words ;-0Alhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15625543235578144620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5413062903651514093.post-81538271441769600692011-03-26T21:54:57.387-05:002011-03-26T21:54:57.387-05:00You knocked it out if the park! Great twist!You knocked it out if the park! Great twist!Kari Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04404956407734167300noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5413062903651514093.post-27804362824467097242011-03-26T20:37:55.570-05:002011-03-26T20:37:55.570-05:00Brilliant! I'd read on to see what happens nex...Brilliant! I'd read on to see what happens next!Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5413062903651514093.post-17057980855122417122011-03-26T12:00:31.297-05:002011-03-26T12:00:31.297-05:00LOL, that is great! Thanks for sharing.LOL, that is great! Thanks for sharing.Charity Bradfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01960821077619680661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5413062903651514093.post-23057230433456857822011-03-25T21:33:14.771-05:002011-03-25T21:33:14.771-05:00I LOVE it! Red and Dot in the fishbowl - awesome. ...I LOVE it! Red and Dot in the fishbowl - awesome. I love how the ant sprouts new legs too. Very creative.Alison Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12179538085536841348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5413062903651514093.post-83470833662768545502011-03-25T18:58:53.723-05:002011-03-25T18:58:53.723-05:00I'm late to the party ... but this was great. ...I'm late to the party ... but this was great. Very very well done and a great deal of fun to read. Two thumbs, errr, fins up.The Happy Whiskhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13438469476168485775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5413062903651514093.post-55029932219214976852011-03-25T13:57:02.644-05:002011-03-25T13:57:02.644-05:00I love this! Each sentence is another great layer...I love this! Each sentence is another great layer to this (didn't get the ant at first, but now, great touch!). Wonderful job!Witless Expositionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07455282931743006892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5413062903651514093.post-24800338700211507632011-03-25T11:07:12.805-05:002011-03-25T11:07:12.805-05:00I loved that, Susan!! I can't believe it's...I loved that, Susan!! I can't believe it's something you wrote so quickly!Talli Rolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04780882465745107715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5413062903651514093.post-56206251859904337772011-03-25T08:29:34.379-05:002011-03-25T08:29:34.379-05:00ooooh, we love Terry Lynn!ooooh, we love Terry Lynn!DEZMONDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14127166104359407763noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5413062903651514093.post-80690227039859727362011-03-25T07:11:47.289-05:002011-03-25T07:11:47.289-05:00Nice job!! I love the slight eeriness of the piece...Nice job!! I love the slight eeriness of the piece. Enjoy your weekend.S.A. Larsenッhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06241633272588383935noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5413062903651514093.post-33839434554347929032011-03-25T03:22:33.439-05:002011-03-25T03:22:33.439-05:00Great twist. Now I'm wondering why! :-)Great twist. Now I'm wondering why! :-)Cally Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08313803959936813426noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5413062903651514093.post-49731757866999871962011-03-24T22:48:03.979-05:002011-03-24T22:48:03.979-05:00Ooh, fun! Nice twist! :)Ooh, fun! Nice twist! :)Dawn Simonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05667675689038435581noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5413062903651514093.post-36138212539581792592011-03-24T21:57:52.244-05:002011-03-24T21:57:52.244-05:00I loved the twist.
Have a great weekend.I loved the twist.<br /><br />Have a great weekend.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5413062903651514093.post-52491314730396111912011-03-24T21:16:22.234-05:002011-03-24T21:16:22.234-05:00hi miss susan! yikes! i got a twisted blogger frie...hi miss susan! yikes! i got a twisted blogger friend. ack! ha ha. im thinking thats gotta be pretty hard doing a story in just only 100 words and being told how to start it out. im gonna try it for fun. you did a really cool story with a surprise at the end. now im scared to go look in our fish tank. who knows whos in there. ha ha.<br />...hugs from lennyLenny Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12822588007434789481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5413062903651514093.post-21941986032843683332011-03-24T20:25:17.504-05:002011-03-24T20:25:17.504-05:00That was great! Yep...twisted!That was great! Yep...twisted!Sharon K. Mayhewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07799235347319851345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5413062903651514093.post-62453605415116092402011-03-24T19:42:23.163-05:002011-03-24T19:42:23.163-05:00That is awesome!!! I do love a twisted mind :)
Ca...That is awesome!!! I do love a twisted mind :)<br /><br />Can't wait to read your review - I adored Terry's book - it is FANTASTIC!Jemi Fraserhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02214408467456320167noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5413062903651514093.post-38883915762650840172011-03-24T19:07:56.185-05:002011-03-24T19:07:56.185-05:00WOW, this is pretty cool - and as for flash fictio...WOW, this is pretty cool - and as for flash fiction, I really love how each line can totally change what you're expecting from the story :)Trishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927558937796802496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5413062903651514093.post-85141153100561015562011-03-24T18:59:04.576-05:002011-03-24T18:59:04.576-05:00great twist at the end - really enjoyed thisgreat twist at the end - really enjoyed thisalberta rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02132420168908365099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5413062903651514093.post-57386436861647375162011-03-24T17:15:13.120-05:002011-03-24T17:15:13.120-05:00So impressed! A story about a girl who can transfo...So impressed! A story about a girl who can transform ants - and apparently her parents! (ouch!) all in 100 words. VEry, very impressed!Margo Berendsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03476308235642890474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5413062903651514093.post-62384052511891823192011-03-24T16:48:30.760-05:002011-03-24T16:48:30.760-05:00Lovely, Susan. It's really hard to write flash...Lovely, Susan. It's really hard to write flash fiction. I'm not good at it, so I'm pretty much in awe of anyone who is. It's amazing how much you've conveyed in only 100 words!Carolina M. Valdez Schneiderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11589934533051907801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5413062903651514093.post-4758704503442556282011-03-24T16:25:52.572-05:002011-03-24T16:25:52.572-05:00Very interesting. Nice job.Very interesting. Nice job.Crystal Collierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03912469552483168148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5413062903651514093.post-17489199142878420582011-03-24T16:21:12.647-05:002011-03-24T16:21:12.647-05:00I love the twist in your flash fiction! :) Great s...I love the twist in your flash fiction! :) Great story.Golden Eaglehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08721520451194318436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5413062903651514093.post-50022444737876297192011-03-24T16:05:53.173-05:002011-03-24T16:05:53.173-05:00There was something fishy about this ending! Great...There was something fishy about this ending! Great job!jkraus8464https://www.blogger.com/profile/15138306757339514666noreply@blogger.com